Loneliness
has started killing me
deep inside
I feel so left out
waiting for one thing or the other
&
still I am all alone...
Singing is still there,
but I have no listener
I still dance,
but no audience for me
There is a world within world
which is not mine anymore
I am not myself
its YOU
within me.
© Vim
Dated: Jan 10, 2008
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Guess you need rediscover the new you...give yourself a second chance...life is a beautiful thing to let go like this...
Anonymous said...
Thursday, July 3, 2008 at 4:24:00 AM PDT
ya I wrote this one in one weak spam of time...now am back to myself...thanks dear!!!
V
Shadows of life said...
Wednesday, July 9, 2008 at 12:52:00 AM PDT
Hmm... Can imagine..!!Anyways! its a bad phase that has passed!!
The poem is touching indeed!!
Krashed said...
Wednesday, July 23, 2008 at 3:55:00 PM PDT
Absolutely mind numbing. Amazing. Such a powerful string of words...
Varun Rajagopalan said...
Tuesday, September 15, 2009 at 11:27:00 AM PDT
Thank you Varun...Luckily those emional days are gone...
V
Shadows of life said...
Thursday, September 17, 2009 at 2:28:00 AM PDT